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April 11, 2004

Categories: Drabbles & Shorts, Harry Potter, Slash

Rating: PG.

Fandom/Spoilers: Harry Potter. Books and movies.

Summary: Percy/Oliver. Courting.

Disclaimer: Rowling, not me.

"Wait," Percy said. "There's a spider on your shoulder."

Oliver looked. "Where?"

Percy brushed it away. "It's gone now."


"There's a leaf in your hair," Percy said. His fingers combed through Oliver's hair. "That's got it."


"There's dirt on your face," Percy said. He dabbed at Oliver's cheek with his handkerchief. "There, all gone."


"I can see some fluff on your back," Percy said. He put one hand on Oliver's shoulder and plucked at Oliver's robes with the other. "You're all tidy now."


"You've got a bit of toothpaste there," Percy said. He thumbed the corner of Oliver's mouth, once, twice. "Clean," he said and smiled.


"You've got--" Percy said and stumbled as he took Oliver's arm. They staggered together and fell over in a heap.

"What have I got on me now?" Oliver said.

"Well ... me, I suppose," Percy said.

"Just so we're clear," Oliver said and kissed him.

FINIS

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AWWWWWW, that was so cute and FLUFFLYYY <33

i loved it.

Camila @ May 30, 2004

Aw! This is so cool! Love it.

Ireth @ June 21, 2004

Aw! This is so cool! Love it.

Ireth @ June 21, 2004

So cute. Made me smile.

Annie @ June 27, 2004

awwwww :D

@ July 23, 2004

Awww... How sweet. LOL. Very nicely done for a drabble. I can see Percy being that person too. You know, the one who isn't afraid to point out that lint on your collar, or the mud all down your arm. And, of course, help you with it, LOL. Again, there's not much to say besides, 'Cuteness'. In the extreme.

InkWick @ August 08, 2004

Percy is good for only one thing- comic relief in fics. Oh! And shocking him for being such a prude.
Big smile at the end!

Shikala @ September 07, 2004

aww!!! that was just the right amount of everything. slightly fluffy, yet it still leaves a lot to the imagination.

great job!

tisay @ October 16, 2004

Perfect.

Charlefrank @ October 10, 2005

awwwwwwww! CUTE! & fuuuuuunny!

Age @ May 01, 2006

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