Like The First Time

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July 29, 2003

Categories: Drabbles & Shorts, Harry Potter, Slash

Rating: PG13.

Fandom/Spoilers: Harry Potter. Books and movies.

Summary: Harry/Draco. At last.

Disclaimer: Rowling, not me.

Notes: Written for the hp100 Pensieve challenge.

Draco waited until he couldn't stand it anymore. Then he lured Harry into an empty classroom and pushed him up against the wall.

Harry struggled briefly, then he put his arms around Draco and kissed him like he couldn't stand it anymore either.

"Wait," said Draco, when they were done. He pulled silver strands out of both their heads, dropping them into a small stone basin.

Then they glared at each other, bristling.

"What do you want, Malfoy?" Harry said.

"You're the one following me." Draco picked up the Pensieve and left.


Draco waited until he couldn't stand it anymore.

FINIS

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i wish i had pensieve. then i could make memories of all the times me and draco...

whoops, too much said.

Shelby @ August 05, 2003

help i am stupid i dont understand help

Itoshi @ September 08, 2003

Well, I like the Draco/Harry too... Naughty BD, naughty BD!!!

Really interesting, they can't get enought, can they?

Babydracky @ October 20, 2003

Cuteeeee! such a cute couple and one of my favs

emz @ November 14, 2003

just smickers and carries on with reading other fics short and funny says all in very few words!

queeneb @ January 09, 2004

Confusing... and strange. i think i like.

Owlie @ January 20, 2004

One thing I've noticed (and like) about a lot of your HP fiction is that you have a tendency towards effective, sometimes surprising one-liner endings. Your scenarios feel fresh and, even if some have been done before, the plot ideas feel new. This one, though short, was no exception. Sorry, it's rather more of a general review than of this specific story!
Ellie.

darkgreen @ February 20, 2004

Je ne comprends pas...but twas very interesting and...not-understandable for uber-stupid people like moi...
Brilliant work...as usual.

Mana @ March 09, 2004

Brilliant. Over and over again, because Draco can't move past a first kiss. And he will check the pensieve and have all the different variations of the firsts, won't he?

Norvegica @ May 24, 2004

i really don't understand what's o difficult about all your fics... i haven't commented on most (any?) of them, but i like them all so so much.

Katie @ May 30, 2004

argh. i don't understand what's so difficult to understand about your fics is what i meant.

Katie @ May 30, 2004

mmm i love them

@ August 03, 2004

Wow. Your ability to infuse so much meaning into just a few lines leaves me in awe. You possess such a wonderful talent, and I really hope you continue your fantastic writing.

I loved the hopelessness of the situation, and could sort of feel and understand the desperation that might push Draco to resort to such methods of realising his desires (Um. Not making sense here). Despite it being short, this is something I'm sure I'll come back to and read over and over again, simply in order to pick up on anything I have missed. Haha, it's like an onion - all the layers to peel back! Only without the smell.

For the record, it took a few rereads for me to understand what was going on :D

Khas @ October 25, 2004

DID HE LIKE OBLIVATE HARRY AFTER SAVING THE MEMORIES OF them snogging?????? I DON'T GET IT HELP N-E 1

katina @ October 31, 2004

Damn. I love your last lines. They just sum everything up and are just so beautiful.

I loved this. I love your writing.

Marry me, darling.

=]

Lauren. @ January 01, 2005

Ok I suppse I'm being thick but I don't understand either! Can someone email me and tell me? Plz??

Pip @ February 13, 2005

what a perfect title...what a perfect fic! i love when the situation presents itself for an author to use repetition of lines and make it sound good.

elsie @ April 27, 2005

The only think I find unclear about this fic is whether or not Harry is consious of what is going on. I assume not, because Draco takes the pensive with him.

I agree that you have a talent for your last lines. You are also gifted with twists and I have noticed a tendency to make half finished refrences that (less intelligent) people might miss (such as the mention of Wendy in your Patronus ficlet). I envy you...

Swanky @ November 05, 2005

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