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June 18, 2003

Categories: Het, Lord of the Rings

Rating: R.

Fandom/Spoilers: Lord of the Rings. Movies and books.

Summary: Éomer/Éowyn. Take care of your sister.

Disclaimer: Tolkien, not me.

Notes: Thanks to Kest for beta.

Take care of your sister.

Those were the last words Éomer heard from his mother when she died, and the first he heard from his uncle when he came into that house.

And so he had. He'd dried Éowyn's tears in her grief, fed her bread in her hunger, given her strength in her need. She would not leave his side to do as the women did and so he taught her on the field as well, with sword and shield and bow.

Take care of me, brother, she would say, her hand in his, and he could deny her nothing.

When Éowyn was a woman grown, men's eyes began to follow her. But always she turned her head away, for she had no need, she said, for any other man. And Éomer would smile, but sadly, for he knew some day she would not turn away.

Then one night, when the north wind was bitter with snow, she came to him at night and roused him from his sleep.

I am cold, Éowyn said. I would not be alone. She lay down beside him, her head pillowed on his shoulder and her unbound hair spilling over his chest.

Her body stretched alongside Éomer's and he put his arms around her. She shook and to Éomer she seemed to give off heat, so that he thought her fevered.

I will fetch the leech, he said, but she embraced him and would not let him go.

Take care of me, brother, she said, and put her arms about his neck and kissed his mouth.

This was wrong, Éomer knew, a brother did not lie with his sister. But her mouth was warm and her arms clinging and he loved her more than anything else on the black earth.

The taste of her filled him with hunger. He pulled her close and stroked her face and throat, kissed the hollow of her neck, her shoulder where her gown had pulled aside.

She kissed his face over and over, his cheeks above the beard, his temples, the corners of his mouth. She loosened her gown and took his hand and held it to her breast.

Éomer learned her body, intent upon each curve, as though he were a skald and Éowyn a verse that he was making. He touched her and she cried out softly. He wished that he could see her face.

Take care of me, she said again, and Éomer could wait no longer. He raised her gown, his hands sliding over her strong thighs. He entered her and she cried out again, this time in pain. It grieved him, but she wrapped her arms around him and kissed him as he moved against her.

He spent before too long, and when he rolled aside, Éowyn put her face against his neck and wept. And Éomer wept too, wetting his beard with tears, and they lay sleepless in each other's arms until dawn.

The next night, she came to him again.

FINIS

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@ July 19, 2003

bittersweet... *sighs* :)

trinity @ July 27, 2003

Ohhhhhhhh, yes. My first thought upon finishing ROTK was, Eomer loves his sister somuch! This piece is hot, yet lyrical, and they seem to be painfully aware of the consequences of their actions. Lovely!

Elina @ September 14, 2003

That is amazing. *devoted fan*

Maggie @ December 28, 2003

ok that was just wrong!!!i a have a brother 2 so..EWWWWWWW!!! i dont get y u ppl think that so like "lovely" i noe im just possibly to u a mini-person but still i noe that that is...wrong. ok that poorly displayed evrything tolkien fans believe in!!!

undisclosed- mini-ppl!! @ January 25, 2004

Do you have a brother? Coz if you did, you'd know how totally sickening this is - can't you stick to Eowyn and Faramir, or Eomer and Faramir - don't do the incest thing it is too scary!!!! I know it's fanfiction or whatever, but brother/sister is going a bit too far - that made me feel sick.

rach @ January 28, 2004

I second the comments "bittersweet" and "lovely"...

As for "Do you have a brother? Coz if you did, you'd know how totally sickening this is"... holy crap, grow up! If you don't want to sleep with your brother, fine. That's generally the way it works (and so we don't have compromised offspring and probably to protect us emotionally that's no doubt generally the way it's meant to work) - but life has a way of slipping through the cracks sometimes and sibling fic explores the issues that might arise when it does... in an imaginative space, for those who care to go there. And if you don't, you could always (hot tip) read the warnings and stay away...

I have two brothers, I don't want to screw either of them, and I write Eomer/Eowyn (amongst other pairings) too [cue shameless plug] -

http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/StoriesbyAuthor/M/MirandaBell.htm

Thanks for a thoughtful story,
Love Miranda.

miranda bell @ February 08, 2004

I adore Eomer/Eowyn, and you've captured their essence here. This was simply beautiful, sweet without being sappy, and the writing really invoked the simplicity and plainness of the Rohirrim. I really enjoyed this.

Jai @ February 15, 2004

some people say it is sick...but before you read the story it said rated R Eomer/Eowyn that should say something, DONT READ IF OFFENDED BY INCEST...ok i loved it, it was not a matter of incest she was lonely her brother took care of her and he was all she knew she needed someone she can trust. lovely very well written, keep up the excellent work. hey have anything with Arwen/Elrond? hee hee we are bad!!

Tamryn Greenleaf @ March 02, 2004

Nice. I really liked it. I never would have imagined such a pairing, but you worded everything wonderfully. Great job.

Simbelmynė @ April 03, 2004

Sweet and beautiful. You've done it again Harloprillalar! I really enjoyed this! He was just so protective of her! I want Eomer!

I have been noticing much flaming in all of these stories, where people say this is disgusting, why would anyone write it and so on. Well I have a tip for them. Two tips actually. Firstly, if you have a problem with it, don't read it. And secondly, go away. You'll make everyone much happier. Except I do so enjoy being mean to you!

:)

Em @ June 17, 2004

Elves are only supose to have sex with their siblings.

Celebel @ June 25, 2004

Elves are only supose to have sex with their siblings.

Celebel @ June 25, 2004

Well, I thought it was good up until the end. It is true that I don't like incest- I hate it.

However, especially so in this case because Eowyn married Faramir, and Eomer gave his love to Lothiriel. They did not love each other.

I'm not saying that you were wrong to write this story; it was very well written. You are clearly a good author.

But the incest thing was really too much.

Guthwyn @ July 19, 2004

Wow. Just wow. For maybe a few weeks now, I have been playing with the thought of writing Éowyn/Émer, just a short fic, lots of love, a bit of sex, and lots of angst. There is no need for me to write it now -this is perfect! It's sweet, and it brings together the affection that is so obvious with the angst brought from forbidden actions. Would it just have been a story about some sex, it would have been boring and unimportant, but the way their love for each other and the obvious realisation that they shouldn't behave like that... Wow. This story is explosive, and in so few, poetic words. I am blown away.

Sianna @ July 26, 2004

Eomer and eowyn love each other in a brother - sister way. great story I wish it had been longer thogh.
Eomer is extremely handsome.

Sheba @ August 18, 2004

This was a spare, magnificent, poignant story.

I've been reading many of your fics lately. They're all wonderful, and I owe you feedback. You do seem to be rather plagued by idiots with flames for brains; I thought I'd extend you some sympathy on that front.

Ruby @ August 28, 2004

Eowyn/Eomer, *shudders* it was well written adn all, but if it had just been Lothiriel, so much better.

Saffron @ November 02, 2004

Brill story but still quite sickening,cant stand the thought of them too gettin together,Really good though.Keeo the work up but eugh!lol.Loved it really but it just makes me a bit wary of my brothers now,just kidding.Really beautiful and of course it was in the story an anciemt time when not many laws like this had come into place so making something like this made it beautiful as they never thought it was impure.Thanks but still not to keen on teh bro and sis thing,thanks anyway,and im only 13 btw so normally iw ould be going ewew!!
Roisin xxx

Roisin @ November 04, 2004

Oh yeah? What a lovely story! ::Cracks up again::
You people who enjoy reading stories about Eowyn
and Eomer having sex can just go fuck with your
own brother or sister! Doesn't anyone have any morals anymore? And as for the person who says they like to "be mean" to flamers, I couldn't care
less what you say! No skin off of my back. I hope you enjoy f---ing with your sister or brother to-night!

You will probably remove this review because this site sucks! @ December 01, 2004

EWWW!!! HELLO! THEY ARE BROTHER AND SISTER! J.R.R TOLKIEN DID NOT I REPEAT DID NOT MAKE THEM SO THEY COULD BE IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER! I HAVE A BROTHER! AND TO DO THAT STUFF YOU WROTE DOWN..IS WRONG! but..the story was well written..but it would have been better if it was not Eomer.

Nessa/Liana Ringeril @ February 07, 2005

EWWW!!! HELLO! THEY ARE BROTHER AND SISTER! J.R.R TOLKIEN DID NOT I REPEAT DID NOT MAKE THEM SO THEY COULD BE IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER! I HAVE A BROTHER! AND TO DO THAT STUFF YOU WROTE DOWN..IS WRONG! but..the story was well written..but it would have been better if it was not Eomer.

Nessa Ringeril @ February 07, 2005

Really well written but it isn't realistic and really not faithfull to Tolkien.

If Eowyn found what she was looking for in Eomer why would she be chassing Aragorn?

Estel @ February 10, 2005

hmm the incest kinda squicks me, but it was great writing and v good overall. just my opinion.

Pip @ February 13, 2005

Personally, I thought that it was wonderful. If it had been simply sex, then I would have found it uninteresting (not to say a tad warped) but the love and genuine affection shone through in this fic.

And yes, I have 2 brothers and a sister. No, I would not dream of doing anything with them.

Elspeth @ November 25, 2005