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April 21, 2003

Categories: Drabbles & Shorts, Harry Potter

Rating: PG.

Fandom/Spoilers: Harry Potter. Books and movies.

Summary: Draco is different.

Disclaimer: Rowling, not me.

Notes: For the hp100 When Pigs Fly (Out of Character) challenge.

"You're looking nice today," Draco said.

Hermione stared. Ron pushed in front of her. "What are you up to, Malfoy?"

"Just being friendly." Draco clapped Ron on the shoulder, then walked down the hallway, stopping to help a Hufflepuff first year with a stack of books.

The next day, Draco congratulated Harry on his magnificent catch in last week's Quidditch game and brought Professor McGonagall a bouquet of daisies.

On the third day, Draco was helping Neville with his Charms homework when he slid to the floor, unconscious. They carried him to the hospital wing.

The brain tumour was inoperable.

FINIS

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But... *sniffle* poor Drake baby!

Uh, yeah...

little Alex @ May 28, 2003

WAAAH! I knew there *had* to be something wrong with him to act like that.

Anu @ June 28, 2003

Hah. Cute.

@ June 29, 2003

Awwwww, now I really dont act like this when it comes to Draco. But, *AWWWWWWW*!!! Poor Draco!!!!

Zoe @ July 10, 2003

You are mean very mean!

@ July 11, 2003

"Draco, since you only have so long to live, maybe you'd like to...*whispers something into Draco's ear with a naughty smile*"

"Okay. Your room or mine?" Draco asks.

"Your is closer."

Draco takes Shelby's hand and they hurry in the direction of the Slytherin common rooms...

Shelby @ August 05, 2003

oy i dunno.... ive made loads better than this. is quite good though...

janeway @ February 07, 2004

Oh, this was quite good! I've been browsing through your stuff, and liking it all. Although you do have a bit of taste for angst, don't you? However, there was one thing in this one that confused me. In this line:

On the third day, Draco was helping Neville with his Charms homework when he slid to the floor, unconscious.

I wasn't sure if it was Draco or Neville sliding to the floor. It isn't quite clear who the pronoun was referring to. Other than that, this was remarkably good!

aidenfire @ May 29, 2004

Omg! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHH! That was really funny! Too bad about Draco though... :'(

Em @ June 04, 2004

Thats mean but kinda of funny too. But still Poor Poor Draco!! :-( POOR POOR POOR Draco...
POOR POOR POOR POOR POOR DRACO!!! (SORRY I lost myslef again) Great Work!!

im4malfoy @ June 17, 2004

OMG! Bwa-hahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
Just great, and awful and hysterical :D
XXX

'whorly @ July 31, 2004

So sad

Anastacia @ January 07, 2005

im going to laugh all night.

Garnet @ April 09, 2005

*gump* THE FLUFF?! *thud*

Jessica @ April 26, 2005

that is not right. draco is supposed to be mean not nice!

fluffy @ August 09, 2005

sad! i just wanna go up to Draco and kiss it all better!!

desi @ August 26, 2005

Haha, there had 2 be sumpin wrong with him!

Sara @ November 04, 2005

cries

michelle @ November 17, 2005

I actually snorted. That was funny... But I do love Draco.

Alex @ December 20, 2005

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