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April 1, 2003

Categories: Drabbles & Shorts, Harry Potter

Rating: G.

Fandom/Spoilers: Harry Potter. Books and movies.

Summary: Neville's day.

Disclaimer: Rowling, not me.

Notes: For the hp100 Expulsion Challenge.

Nobody knew where Neville had gotten it. Half of them didn't even know what it was.

Just another day of Double Potions, Slytherin and Gryffindor. Like last month, last year, so many years before. Another day of Slytherin jabs and Gryffindor scowls and Hermione pursing her lips as she measured her ingredients.

Another day of Snape leaning over Neville's cauldron, telling him he'd never be able to make passable soup, let alone a decent potion.

Just another day until Neville jumped to his feet, pulled something out of his robes. "You can't talk to me like that," he said and raised his hand.

"Put that away, Longbottom," Snape said, "and sit down."

Neville pulled the trigger.

FINIS

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Hoo. You had me; I was expecting Neville to do something funny like blow up the universe in Potions class and instead, I got a punch in the stomach. Neville's helpless, hopeless world-view is perfectly expressed and deeply distressing, and all in about 100 words.
Anyway, I hope Snape's a quick ducker...

Mel @ June 25, 2003

I agree with Mel, I hope Snape can duck fast.

Anu @ June 28, 2003

oooh. s'got a pearl jam jeremy vibe going on. very nice.

Molly @ July 24, 2003

i agree with mel. on everything.

SHIT!

Shelby @ August 05, 2003

Shit. Neville. Neville, my favourite character, and you've turned him into this, ooh, this wonderful thing. It's just a drabble, but gods. This is amazing. I was wondering if I could write a fic on this drabble. Or you, as you'd probably write it better.Just mail me with the answer.

Amen @ February 29, 2004

SNAPE!!! NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sighs* well, I cant say you didn't suprise me, but did Snape, beloved potions master, really deserve to die?

Lady Belladonna Noire @ March 16, 2004

i gasped...out loud and everything! omg! wow! how do u make stuff feel so real?

@ April 09, 2004

U go Nev! Snape derserved it! Or did he???? Maybe Snape's just a bleeding heart crying out to be loved... *wipes a tear from corner of eye*

Lillibloom @ June 03, 2004

No he isnt the poor soul crying out to be loved! Thats Draco! Grrrrr...

d evil squirrel! @ June 03, 2004

Ok, OK, i'm sorry. Draco's a bleeding heart. Also. FINIS

Lillibloom @ June 03, 2004

i woudn't mind loving him! Thats Draco i am talking bout not Snape!

d evil squirrel! @ June 03, 2004

D'you realize were havin a conversation? Anyhoo... I read a fanfic once. It had Draco. And Leather. MMmmmmmmmm............... But we're gettin slightly off the topic... Great fic, thankyou, goodnight!!! lol

Lillibloom @ June 03, 2004

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo..... Dont go! I mean u r sat next 2 me but.... anyhoo! Draco... and leather! Ahhhhhhhhhh! Boom! Excuse me While my head explodes! Oh nooooooo we have just gone 2 a very bad mental place! Involving Draco... Draco and leather... but also snape... and also whipping! :( OR :) U no... woteva butters ure toast! Unless its ure granma! Oh god even worse mental place! BANG! excuse me while i smack my head against the wall! Many times! GOoDBYE!

d evil squirrel! @ June 03, 2004

omg! laughed so hard! i thought neville was going to try and hex snape or something! ... omg! hahahahahaahh!

Em @ June 04, 2004

Oh, wow. Really. Just...wow. That really got me. So, well, dark. I've never thought like that before. Very, very nice.

Ervinai @ June 08, 2004

Not much left to comment on as everything seems to be said but nice. And I don't care if Snape can duck 'cause happy enddings are over used.

fanficfinatic @ October 07, 2004

*gasp* scary...i can so see neville doing that. which is also scary.

elsie @ April 27, 2005

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